CASE FILE:
Jonas’ Father
Overview of
the Case:
One
year after Gabriel was given an additional year to develop and grow, right
before he was named and placed into a family unit, Jonas’ father became attached
to the child and refused to give him back as the time approached. Jonas’ father
is now held guilty for breaking the laws of the community.
Crime Scene:
Baby
Gabriel and Jonas’s father was found in the home of Jonas and his family unit after
the communities law enforcers broke inside. The house, besides the two, was
empty. Only one bike was found at the house. The whereabouts of the rest of the
family is currently unknown. This has brought up a whole new case. Baby items
such as: baby food, clothes, and toys were also found inside the home.
Suspects:
Jonas’
father is the prime suspect and the only suspect in the case. Jonas’ father is
the father of Jonas (12 years old) and Lily (8 years old). He is married to
Jonas’ mother who holds a high position in the Department of Justice. Jonas’
father is a nurturer at the Nurturing Center, and was caring for the child at
the time of his ‘kidnapping’.
Evidence:
There
is plenty of evidence to prove that Jonas’ father is guilty of the kidnapping
of 1 ½ year old Gabriel. One, Gabriel was found under the care of Jonas’ father
at his home. One week ago from
yesterday, Gabriel went missing from the nurturers. If this alone isn't enough
evidence itself, then one could go on about the baby items found. Cabinets
inside the homes kitchen and in the refrigerator were filled will baby
food/milk. Like most one year olds, the child obtains a comfort object at the Ceremony of One. Gabe's, a hippo, was also found at the house. By taking ‘Gabe’ home and refusing to return him, he violates two
rules: kidnapping and overloading the family unit capacity. The community is
still investigating the disappearance of the rest of the family. Jonas’ father
is a prime suspect once again in this new case.
Conclusion:
Based
on the evidence, it seems more than likely that Jonas’ father is guilty of the
kidnapping of young Gabriel. Gabriel was found in the suspect’s home, right alongside
with the suspect. The house was filled with items intended for babies, such as
Gabriel. His children Jonas and Lily are not of the age to use such things so
we know that they aren't for them. The suspect being the only one, is 100%
guilty of the crime. IF found guilty,
Jonas’ father will most likely be released due to this.
I like the case file feeling of this piece, though I do wish you had been a little more creative in the presentation of it. Overall, well done.
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